So I just wrote a whole critique, only to find that I couldn’t remember exactly what you had said at one point…
So I went back to retrieve the quote and lost the critique 😂
Let me see what I can retrieve:
I’ve been every one of you, always as a man, of course, which is worth pointing out in this day and age, and especially because of the way that these events are nestled into Hollywoodness as they are
The best thing I can probably say about that is that it took me to that edge
I know that edge and you were able to echo it for me, even though the circumstances were different
As far as actual critique goes, the one thing I wanted that I didn’t get was a little dramatic pause between “my instincts told me to jump out of the car and gouge your eyes out”
And “so I did”
Otherwise, this piece reads lean and visceral, like a piece of wire without enough shielding left on it
Always as a man, haha!. Yeah I cut out a bit at that point and throughout to not make the post so long … maybe i should add it in but you can also get the free full chapter here: https://amzn.to/4ivsfCQ
oh, i see you, embracing the chaos with every inch of your soul. it’s like watching someone dance in the middle of a storm, refusing to apologize for the mess. honestly, you deserve that malbec and kit kat because sometimes, screaming through red lights is the only way to feel alive again. here’s to the mess and the madness🤣🤣
Hi, babe! Good to meet you! 🖤❤️ Likewise, if you’re interested in a fresh perspective on culture, lifestyle, and politics, I’d really appreciate it if you could please subscribe to Letters From the Castle 🏰🌙💜
There’s something familiar in your story—not the same path, but the same fire. Maybe one day we’ll sit down and share the full journeys. For now, just keep tending that flame. You’re not alone.
daaaaaaayym, you got me raging for you. Especially how you meet the ho, and she says such shitty things to you... I feel your hurt. But be PROUD for transmuting this hurt into wisdom for others to learn from.
Wow. I especially liked the binge at the end. Very relatable. But, if chance allowed a kick on the dick would have been good reply. To all the frevelous bouncing around, with slim chick.
But, my what a tale. It shows how mannerisms fool the beauty into landing with a prick.
Yet, another time the spirit of prince charming, gets attacked by a prick charming. Sorry about that. I hope Mexico and the dog has been charming enough to keep your spirit alive.
I've had a sort of a similar situation brewing. If you want to hear.. But, as a dude there is very chance, I can punt 🦵🏻 and punch 👊🏻..
There is this family friend. Been around us for the life of me. Then, I moved to the city. Came back when the lockdowns happened. And been here with the family ever since.
Used to like this guy. Seemed cool enough. Macho, personality. Always a bit generous with gift. So, I though one day. Perhaps, I would gift back. I brought something for his daughter. Then, something for him and his wife, (you know the spinning glittery couple they usually have at gift shops)..
All is going well. Then, he wants to know about my love life. Why, I don't have a girlfriend. And all the personal jazz. I maneuver the best, I can. In innuendos and tricky silence.. 🤐.
One day I shop up at my brother's workplace. The man is sitting there. Comes close. Starts to show me pictures of women, and then random chats with them as well. I thought. This guy is married right. Anyways that the first time. I was a little mad, and I let the company know this is frevelous behaviour. My brother at the time seemed complicit..
Happens again. Shop, questions. I asked about his wife, he tells about how, he braved the lot when he ran away with his wife when her parents were against their marriage. Mood ☺️ is good for now. I cheer a bit internally. Someone with bollocks. Finally a good role model.. perhaps.
A false alarm this was. Another picture of women. His wife is feeling like his mother now. Its been a few years in his marriage. The spark is gone. And they have a daughter. We talk about her. A lot. He seems happy then. But, after a while.
Here are the pictures again. Dudes hanging out with other women. I am left thinking. Didn't this guy talk so savvy about his great escape of a marriage, then talk about this daughter and to this..
So, things are adding up. Another chat at my uncle's funeral. Another women on the verge. One I was interested in the past. At this point. Silence 🤫 is a valid option. Internally, I am feeling Lava..
Like a burst or a kick 🦶🏻 isn't that far.
Anyways, that's sort of my situation. Another dart on the corpse of prince charming.
“Charming at first and then they show their true colors”
Perhaps, in this world of prick charmings, real charming ones are buffering in the quiet's somewhere..
I adore your style, both in your writing and life. I may have missed your poll, but Nick gets the vote for toxicity. Claiming that a friend if his was driving a Prius is ridiculous --and that he thought that would somehow convince you he wasn't cheating is equally ridiculous. (My brother drove an old used one in the early 2000s that had a bumper sticker on it that said: ""Cool Prius" said no one.")
One of the funniest parts of your story is how freely the Prius driver admits to being a sex-worker for rent and hand-me-down Burberry. I mean we have all been there, but I cannot think of admitting it proudly --really, for rent? I will never criticize a sex worker that isn't a victim of human trafficking or addiction, but I hope she realized exactly how idiotic it made her sound that all she was getting was one bedroom in a West Hollywood flat and your used coat.
My only criticism, and it isn't really one at all, but if you had stopped at the Jack in the Box in Malibu, and not waited in line at In N Out --because long lines are their second most famous quality, it would have been almost perfect.
She may have been his mistress, but it was clearly transactional if she was ready to let you know that she not only needed her rent paid, but that was a perk of their arrangement.
Sort of off topic, but PCH is opening again on 5.31, likely just one lane. Can you believe that it has been 5 months without direct access to Santa Monica? And on the Malibu Jack in the Box, I always think of Paul Beatty's book "The Sellout" when I drive by. If you haven't read that book, I need to get it for you. Intelligent and funny as hell ... and there is a Malibu Jack in the Box connection too.
Wow. This is what real self discovery is all about. It's ugly. It's messy and creates a knee jerk reaction that forces you to scratch and claw your way out of a bad situation/relationship. The writing is relatable and grabs you like a good friend would as they try to shake some sense into you for making questionable decisions. I am glad that you are choosing bravery and telling your story. Eloquent storytelling and hard hitting, too. Thank you for sharing. I cannot wait to read more.
Loved this—your energy and message really hit. If you get a sec, I’d be honored if you checked out my latest post too. I think our content aligns in a meaningful way!
@Manny Wolfe your turn my friend… critique away. xo
So I just wrote a whole critique, only to find that I couldn’t remember exactly what you had said at one point…
So I went back to retrieve the quote and lost the critique 😂
Let me see what I can retrieve:
I’ve been every one of you, always as a man, of course, which is worth pointing out in this day and age, and especially because of the way that these events are nestled into Hollywoodness as they are
The best thing I can probably say about that is that it took me to that edge
I know that edge and you were able to echo it for me, even though the circumstances were different
As far as actual critique goes, the one thing I wanted that I didn’t get was a little dramatic pause between “my instincts told me to jump out of the car and gouge your eyes out”
And “so I did”
Otherwise, this piece reads lean and visceral, like a piece of wire without enough shielding left on it
Always as a man, haha!. Yeah I cut out a bit at that point and throughout to not make the post so long … maybe i should add it in but you can also get the free full chapter here: https://amzn.to/4ivsfCQ
Woohoo!
I’m on it!
oh, i see you, embracing the chaos with every inch of your soul. it’s like watching someone dance in the middle of a storm, refusing to apologize for the mess. honestly, you deserve that malbec and kit kat because sometimes, screaming through red lights is the only way to feel alive again. here’s to the mess and the madness🤣🤣
Cheers to the madness🥂 setaria. Damn right I deserved that Malbec. 🫶
Hi, babe! Good to meet you! 🖤❤️ Likewise, if you’re interested in a fresh perspective on culture, lifestyle, and politics, I’d really appreciate it if you could please subscribe to Letters From the Castle 🏰🌙💜
My latest article: https://substack.com/@thewallachiangirl/note/c-107117157?r=5ed86s&utm_medium=ios&utm_source=notes-share-action
Can’t wait to read your first letter from the castle! I’m on the ledge :x
Oooh this looks right up my alley. Reading now…
There’s something familiar in your story—not the same path, but the same fire. Maybe one day we’ll sit down and share the full journeys. For now, just keep tending that flame. You’re not alone.
Yes, I’m sure we could share campfire stories for days. So glad we stumbled upon each other here my sober tribe x
daaaaaaayym, you got me raging for you. Especially how you meet the ho, and she says such shitty things to you... I feel your hurt. But be PROUD for transmuting this hurt into wisdom for others to learn from.
Yes, definitely cathartic to get it not only on the page but in a book…so im thankful for that :D
Your writing is like my hot water bottle on sciatica pain, seriously. Obsessed ❤️
Awww that also relieves my pain. Thank you for that. I’m in love with your work as well. This one about kills me…🖤 Love and spirals
https://substack.com/home/post/p-164804141
Wow. I especially liked the binge at the end. Very relatable. But, if chance allowed a kick on the dick would have been good reply. To all the frevelous bouncing around, with slim chick.
But, my what a tale. It shows how mannerisms fool the beauty into landing with a prick.
Yet, another time the spirit of prince charming, gets attacked by a prick charming. Sorry about that. I hope Mexico and the dog has been charming enough to keep your spirit alive.
I've had a sort of a similar situation brewing. If you want to hear.. But, as a dude there is very chance, I can punt 🦵🏻 and punch 👊🏻..
Oh yes. Please do tell your “situation”
Kick on the dick would have been great if he had opened the damn door. Haha.
Yeah they are always charming at first, then show their colors.
There is this family friend. Been around us for the life of me. Then, I moved to the city. Came back when the lockdowns happened. And been here with the family ever since.
Used to like this guy. Seemed cool enough. Macho, personality. Always a bit generous with gift. So, I though one day. Perhaps, I would gift back. I brought something for his daughter. Then, something for him and his wife, (you know the spinning glittery couple they usually have at gift shops)..
All is going well. Then, he wants to know about my love life. Why, I don't have a girlfriend. And all the personal jazz. I maneuver the best, I can. In innuendos and tricky silence.. 🤐.
One day I shop up at my brother's workplace. The man is sitting there. Comes close. Starts to show me pictures of women, and then random chats with them as well. I thought. This guy is married right. Anyways that the first time. I was a little mad, and I let the company know this is frevelous behaviour. My brother at the time seemed complicit..
Happens again. Shop, questions. I asked about his wife, he tells about how, he braved the lot when he ran away with his wife when her parents were against their marriage. Mood ☺️ is good for now. I cheer a bit internally. Someone with bollocks. Finally a good role model.. perhaps.
A false alarm this was. Another picture of women. His wife is feeling like his mother now. Its been a few years in his marriage. The spark is gone. And they have a daughter. We talk about her. A lot. He seems happy then. But, after a while.
Here are the pictures again. Dudes hanging out with other women. I am left thinking. Didn't this guy talk so savvy about his great escape of a marriage, then talk about this daughter and to this..
So, things are adding up. Another chat at my uncle's funeral. Another women on the verge. One I was interested in the past. At this point. Silence 🤫 is a valid option. Internally, I am feeling Lava..
Like a burst or a kick 🦶🏻 isn't that far.
Anyways, that's sort of my situation. Another dart on the corpse of prince charming.
“Charming at first and then they show their true colors”
Perhaps, in this world of prick charmings, real charming ones are buffering in the quiet's somewhere..
Thanks for your time.
🏠 🪵🪓..
omg prick charmings!!
what an odd story.
have you written about it in a post yet?
seems like the makings of one there.
You know. I had some idea floating about. How, prince charming died? Perhaps, I can sort of work this angle in that.
I adore your style, both in your writing and life. I may have missed your poll, but Nick gets the vote for toxicity. Claiming that a friend if his was driving a Prius is ridiculous --and that he thought that would somehow convince you he wasn't cheating is equally ridiculous. (My brother drove an old used one in the early 2000s that had a bumper sticker on it that said: ""Cool Prius" said no one.")
One of the funniest parts of your story is how freely the Prius driver admits to being a sex-worker for rent and hand-me-down Burberry. I mean we have all been there, but I cannot think of admitting it proudly --really, for rent? I will never criticize a sex worker that isn't a victim of human trafficking or addiction, but I hope she realized exactly how idiotic it made her sound that all she was getting was one bedroom in a West Hollywood flat and your used coat.
My only criticism, and it isn't really one at all, but if you had stopped at the Jack in the Box in Malibu, and not waited in line at In N Out --because long lines are their second most famous quality, it would have been almost perfect.
Oooh yeah that Jack n the Box is bomb but I needed animal style
Thanks for the kind words.
I later found out he had been seeing her a long time. So she was mistress which is a step above call girl.
She may have been his mistress, but it was clearly transactional if she was ready to let you know that she not only needed her rent paid, but that was a perk of their arrangement.
Sort of off topic, but PCH is opening again on 5.31, likely just one lane. Can you believe that it has been 5 months without direct access to Santa Monica? And on the Malibu Jack in the Box, I always think of Paul Beatty's book "The Sellout" when I drive by. If you haven't read that book, I need to get it for you. Intelligent and funny as hell ... and there is a Malibu Jack in the Box connection too.
Haven’t read it. Sounds fun
Wow. This is what real self discovery is all about. It's ugly. It's messy and creates a knee jerk reaction that forces you to scratch and claw your way out of a bad situation/relationship. The writing is relatable and grabs you like a good friend would as they try to shake some sense into you for making questionable decisions. I am glad that you are choosing bravery and telling your story. Eloquent storytelling and hard hitting, too. Thank you for sharing. I cannot wait to read more.
Awww thank you! That means a ton to my vulnerability on here. Yeap. There’s no neat bow to ugly mess.
🖤
Love this!! I’m excited to read more!
Ok I’m hooked. Line and sinker - or whatever the fishing reference is because I haven’t a clue - but THIS has me waiting for Ch 2!!!!
Love that. Thanks! xx
omg just read the whole thing and i’m about to find chapter 2 right now! (haven’t checked yet if it’s out or not but i don’t want this story to end!)
Love that. Thank you. I havent posted chapter 2 yet but soon. You can get 3 first chapters free on this Ana on kindle link here. 💕
https://amzn.to/4ivsfCQ
https://open.substack.com/pub/huntermc/p/the-only-thing-real-is-reality?r=5i2o2u&utm_medium=ios
Loved this—your energy and message really hit. If you get a sec, I’d be honored if you checked out my latest post too. I think our content aligns in a meaningful way!
“You’re not dragging yourself through the day anymore — you’re moving with meaning.”
I feel like this in the morning reading amazing posts like this on Substack. Honestly, the world here has given me few life. 💕
🤍
girl i am HOOKED!!!! i need part 2 now.
Haha. Love that. Coming soon 🫦
Can’t wait for chapter two!
Yay Rhonda, love that you liked it! x
Excited for your chaos! Sorry about Nick, what a piece of shit.